How Paul Plans to go from SSI to Final ARP

To go from my SSI to my final ARP I plan to use more evidence from the actual clip and making sure that the reader gets a thorough understanding of the clip that I am using even if they have never seen the clip before  I also want to work on putting a little more umph in my introduction to back up my thesis statement  On top of that I plan to incorperate a few new sources in this final ARP and possibly delve deeper into the subjects that my source provides and into the arguements that my source is attempting to make and how it is attempting to make them.  Unfortunately other than that I don't see a whole lot more going on with my paper, so perhaps the strategic use of wordier phrases than might be necessary and division of the paper into several more paragraphs so that I can skip a few more lines of writing that I otherwise would have had to complete to reach 7 pages.